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Monday, February 05, 2007

Poetry: "Shaking Out"

The burnt toast, the dripping meal,
the morning tucked and rolled;
The slipp'ry ground, the longing feel,
the wakefulness resold;

The staggered seats, the lecture nap,
the forgetting of the need;
The heavy lunch, the spilled-on lap,
the racing thoughts unfreed;

The shadows long, the youthful year,
the timer ticking down;
The wrinkled brow, the constant fear,
the misdirected frown;

The meal is eaten, broken bread,
the sliding fall begun,
now wide awake in dirty clothes,
with darkness fully come.
Accepted truth, uncertain choice,
of time to make it known
Hoping now for proof,
of worry overblown...
Shaky - that's the word.

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3 Comments:

Blogger Tiffany said...

I like this one. the rhyme scheme really works - the meat of the poem kind of emerges past the nursery-rhyme rhythm and is simultaniously complemented by it

2/05/2007 8:46 PM  
Blogger M.B. said...

Shaky certainly is the word. I'm glad I understand this one better.

2/06/2007 2:03 AM  
Blogger Rachel said...

"the sliding fall begun,
now wide awake in dirty clothes,
with darkness fully come."

= favorite part. this is really good! wonderful rhythm. hey--matt--! you're awesome.

i didn't call you tonight to follow up on the stories because i feel like shit, i didn't go into work bleh. but i read the first you sent and i am hiiiiighly amused :)

2/07/2007 10:35 PM  

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