The Universe As Viewed By One

Sunday, November 19, 2006

Poetry: "Mirror Olympus"

Lying in the garden,

Where foliage surrounds,

Bare children

Playing beneath

The apple tree,

Fighting the temptation

While desperate to act

Of their own free

And sinful will,

While striving to reach

That disdained fruit,

Reaching like the tree itself,

Like the vines and flowers,

Tracing a line of action

Small hands and weathered

Branches alike, stretching

Toward the light,

The light of redemption,

Of a god; not mine, not yours,

Belonging to no one, dispossessed.

All powerful,

Yet ruling nothing;

empowered by lesser things,

by creatures sharing of themselves.

The god serves

The beings set below it,

While they empower the god,

Their love and hate alike strengthen,

Lending purpose,

To an aimless deity

Waiting in the mirror glass

For you, a god in your own world.

Labels: ,

3 Comments:

Blogger Rachel said...

poet ham-bone.

11/29/2006 4:35 PM  
Blogger Tiffany said...

two things:

a) so you left your comment twice so i look more special because i go 2 comments on my poem :)

b) so am i god, or is god abstract? or is god what i could be, if i reach that redemption we're all striving for? and in that case, is there a universal god made up of our individual god-like aspects, and thats how we empower the diety by the sharing of ourselves? but then how is it dispossessed? i'm just working on wrapping my head around the concept, which seems different every time i read this poem. very mentally stimulating piece you've got there :) and interesting how you chose to include olympus in the title, but refer to the christian story of creation

yay, you got my longest comment to date!

11/30/2006 10:59 PM  
Blogger Rachel said...

you're as outdated as i am. we need to do some serious blogging over break.

12/16/2006 1:20 PM  

Post a Comment

<< Home