Poetry: "Mirror Olympus"
Lying in the garden,
Where foliage surrounds,
Bare children
Playing beneath
The apple tree,
Fighting the temptation
While desperate to act
Of their own free
And sinful will,
While striving to reach
That disdained fruit,
Reaching like the tree itself,
Like the vines and flowers,
Tracing a line of action
Small hands and weathered
Branches alike, stretching
Toward the light,
The light of redemption,
Of a god; not mine, not yours,
Belonging to no one, dispossessed.
All powerful,
Yet ruling nothing;
empowered by lesser things,
by creatures sharing of themselves.
The god serves
The beings set below it,
While they empower the god,
Their love and hate alike strengthen,
Lending purpose,
To an aimless deity
Waiting in the mirror glass
For you, a god in your own world.

3 Comments:
poet ham-bone.
two things:
a) so you left your comment twice so i look more special because i go 2 comments on my poem :)
b) so am i god, or is god abstract? or is god what i could be, if i reach that redemption we're all striving for? and in that case, is there a universal god made up of our individual god-like aspects, and thats how we empower the diety by the sharing of ourselves? but then how is it dispossessed? i'm just working on wrapping my head around the concept, which seems different every time i read this poem. very mentally stimulating piece you've got there :) and interesting how you chose to include olympus in the title, but refer to the christian story of creation
yay, you got my longest comment to date!
you're as outdated as i am. we need to do some serious blogging over break.
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